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  • 第一次偷窃行为表明:巴克能适应北方充满敌意的环境,并且能够存活下来。这标志着他的适应性,这种适应性能使他随着环境的改变调适自... 全部评论(2) 去书内

    喵~

    2012-11-06 喜欢(1) 回复(0)

  • 他愤怒至极,第一次看见快递邮差向他走过来,他就狂吠起来,而那些人就以戏弄他作为报复。他猛地扑向箱子的栏杆,哆嗦着、口吐白沫,... 全部评论(2) 去书内

    第三人称的角度描写巴克的状态,所以心理描写就略显单薄。

    2012-11-02 喜欢(1) 回复(0)

  • 巴克住在充满阳光的圣克拉拉山谷中的一所大房子里。这里被称作法官米勒先生的家。这栋房子旁边有条大道,树阴遮住了房子的一半。透过... 全部评论(2) 去书内

    额滴神,这才是房子呢。神都百姓奋斗一生买的水泥笼子算个神马

    2012-11-02 喜欢(1) 回复(1)

  • Buck lived at a big house in the sun-kissed Santa Clara Valley. 全部评论(1) 去书内

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  • The Outsiders were timid and frightened, the Insiders without... 全部评论(1) 去书内

    the new master is really unprofessional that they do not know anything about the travel, they can control well what the are going to do , and do not know the right thing , they only know how to put the wrong on others. this will entire the dogs. i feel sad that buck can not say and just being so unfair.

    2016-12-21 喜欢(0) 回复(0)

  • Buck stood and looked on, the successful champion, the... 全部评论(1) 去书内

    after a long time to work in the strict environment , buck finally remind himself the wild way to live, and the original happy from the blood.

    2016-12-21 喜欢(0) 回复(0)

  • This was a great relief, and Buck caused even the weazened... 全部评论(1) 去书内

    here appear the happiness the in the travel, it is very seldom in such a hard travel, and it means buck get a good suit to the team and the new master.

    2016-12-21 喜欢(0) 回复(0)

  • “Three very good dogs,” Francois told Perrault. “Dat Buck, him... 全部评论(1) 去书内

    here show that half of buck's blood from his mother make him very smart, this is why he can live for such a long time.

    2016-12-21 喜欢(0) 回复(0)

  • They closed in upon her, snarling and yelping, and she was... 全部评论(1) 去书内

    this is really cruel. this is the world that the weakness will be eatton by stronger, it is like the business situation in our world, if you are week , or less knowledge , you will be out.

    2016-12-21 喜欢(0) 回复(0)

  • The onlookers laughed uproariously, and he felt ashamed, he... 全部评论(1) 去书内

    it is cute to see buck first see the snow, buck too long to stay in the south house and did not see the world outside, it is a kind of rude to the animal.

    2016-12-21 喜欢(0) 回复(0)